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hester_prynne
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Lie bury

Post by hester_prynne » August 4th, 2008, 9:31 pm

Lie bury,
here where da books are,
song about that righ?
Where da books are....ooo ooo
yes but ids all a stage,
even the opening lines,
of act one
in the poets theater,
where I go ego,
you go? ego go too,
ain't never alone is we?
jus seems like it,
dirty life,
I once was blind to it,
but now I see,
even tho I don't wanna.
20/20 aged vision,
makin me a whino,
forward motion,
past crumblin at my heels,
can't look back man,
can't.
sorry folks,
I got two minutes left,
here in the lie bury.
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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mnaz
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Post by mnaz » August 4th, 2008, 11:51 pm

Hesty!!

Oh, how I hate the time limit.. As if limits can be placed on expression!
(Of course they can).

"where I go ego,
you go? ego go too,
ain't never alone is we?"

Never quite,
though it can often seem that way.

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Post by Lightning Rod » August 5th, 2008, 12:13 am

what a delightful and witty piece, hest

I'll send you more minutes on PayPal
if you just keep singing
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by constantine » August 5th, 2008, 6:06 am

hester says the darndest things. :arrow: :!:

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Post by judih » August 5th, 2008, 6:32 am

lie bury
it's all yours for half an hour
then shift aside

whino, whine on, hester
there's something about a time limit that forces the mind to jam

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Post by saw » August 5th, 2008, 10:30 am

cool wordplay hester....witty and poignant.....nice work...peace
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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