If a Table Could Talk

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saw
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If a Table Could Talk

Post by saw » August 8th, 2008, 8:11 am

Candlelight was welcome routine
when the mango sun splashed
into its aquamarine bath for the night,
friends talking, laughing, smoking,
listening to byrds singing
about a tambourine man
and the possibility of following him
one day in the jingle jangle morning,
and the eagles sang too about standing
on the corner in winslow arizona
and a woman turning around
her flatbed ford to get a better look,
what a gang !....a witchy woman,
a desperado, and far too many
tequila sunrises to keep track of
as we always sang in unison
and we sometimes sang in key,
each colorful molehill of dripped wax
with its own special story, each stain
from spilled bongwater,
the hippie rorschach told an epic tale,
the burned marks, the dried pizza sauce,
the nightly christenings to a collaborative
piece of art to put a twinkle in the eye
of Jackson Pollack....we didn't need
no stinkin' coasters for bottles
of fire-brewed strohs beer or cans
of busch we nicknamed blue runners,
and conch shells made perfect ashtrays,
but sometimes we couldn't find them
and other times they were there,
but we couldn't see them, lost
in the haze of columbian and jamaican
smoke that curled in hendrixian jams,
and nothing could possibly replace
that big wooden cable reel discarded
by the utility company, ever clueless,
never missed, never accounted for,
never given its proper place
in the history of communal living.
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by SmileGRL » August 8th, 2008, 9:31 am

wooden cable reel tables & conch shell ashtrays...perfect. i like the atmosphere...

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Post by the mingo » August 8th, 2008, 10:26 am

o, there have been times like this, to be had for the having. thanks, saw.
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Post by Doreen Peri » August 9th, 2008, 6:07 pm

loved the melding of lyrics from back in the day

enjoyed this, steve

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Post by mnaz » August 9th, 2008, 6:33 pm

ahh..
whatever happened to strohs?
and the hippie rorschach of course.
Nice. I'm jammin.

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Post by mtmynd » August 10th, 2008, 12:43 am

we still have that big wooden cable reel...

brought the times together quite nicely, steve. well done.

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Post by Lightning Rod » August 10th, 2008, 12:50 am

mtmynd wrote:we still have that big wooden cable reel...

brought the times together quite nicely, steve. well done.
this piece fits well with your chair piece, cec

now we have a complete dining set--table and chairs

nice portrait, saw
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Post by mtmynd » August 10th, 2008, 12:56 am

a rug. where's the rug piece?

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Post by Lightning Rod » August 10th, 2008, 1:24 am

mtmynd wrote:a rug. where's the rug piece?
I'll write one
soon as I get my toupe

I'll wear it right under my My Chapeau
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Post by hester_prynne » August 10th, 2008, 2:56 am

"Hendrixian jams....."
This whole piece is a vision, the hendrixian jams....totally puts it all together.
Fantastic
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Post by Perdida » August 12th, 2008, 6:17 am

you took me back in time with this one Saw, t hank you! Enjoyed.

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Post by saw » August 12th, 2008, 11:14 am

thanx a ton folks....really loved the diversity of the comments

peace......steve
If you do not change your direction
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Post by sweetwater » August 12th, 2008, 11:19 am

the freedom to express
and the reading of it
as liberation

and food for thought

and having a great day!

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