one lazy afternoon

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wannabeguru
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one lazy afternoon

Post by wannabeguru » August 12th, 2008, 6:02 pm

So fine
to see you if only for that time
brief, unsatisfying.....not long enough!

I write it here
though where you'll check who
KNOWS?

Even with 3places to check with
YOU
it
isn't enough, ya know?

Missing isn't so bad
when the sun breaks through
SUDDENLY...and it's you.

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Doreen Peri
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Post by Doreen Peri » August 12th, 2008, 10:13 pm

Sounds like love to me. Or a deep attraction.

Enjoyed.

Nice to see you here again.

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Post by Perdida » August 16th, 2008, 7:09 pm

Missing isn't so bad
when the sun breaks through
SUDDENLY
really loved that. :D
The path to true love isn't always straight.
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