shallowness

[Doreen Peri]

shallowness never scared me
even though i am well aware
i could drown in a teaspoonful

[sweetwater]

a shallowness
that is difficult
to respond to
as if to suggest
only the shallow
would respond?

no - that's just
the expressed insecurity
of the stranger inside myself

[hester_prynne]

This..is sublime Dor....love it, brevity and all....
H

[Lightning Rod]

this is too deep a subject for me

all my teaspoons are burnt on the bottom

[emel.scott]

Well it should scare you. I always stay at the deep end of the pool, then if I drown, at least people won't laugh at me (any more then they do already at least)

[stilltrucking]

shallowness never scared me
even though i am well aware
i could drown in a teaspoonful

that is deep
ditto what hester said.

[Doreen Peri]

sweetwater - i love your reply, thank you!

hest .... you're a dear. thanks much.

Lrod - ..... I have nothing to say about burnt spoons. Yuck.

emel - I don't know where this came from. I found it in my notes. I mean I don't remember the inspiration for it. Someone probably called me shallow. Oh well. I guess that's their shallowness showing. I know how easily I can drown.

truckin .... thanks very much, friend