hanging inside my hair

[SmileGRL]

i'm hanging
like a wilted flower
hanging inside my hair
hanging like a computer
overwhelmed
over here
over you

...someone is running naked over my heart and ringing bells and leaving cheese crumbs to feed me hungry and here i am. and there you are. and what? is this then when it's not just a poem

i'm hanging
inside my hair
but only for a little while longer
because i'm getting tired of this view

.

[Arcadia]

to get tired is good
to be comfortable too!
(sometimes)

I enjoyed it!!!

[Axanderdeath]

"and here i am. and there you are. and what?"

i like that line...

[judih]

i like it all
very 3D

[SmileGRL]

arcadia...the trouble with comfortzones is that they get uncomfortable sometimes... thanks for the "enjoyed"

axander...thank you kindly for reading and liking

miss judih! thank you. 3D... i like that

[Perdida]

..someone is running naked over my heart and ringing bells and leaving cheese crumbs to feed me hungry

argghh, absolutely love the above lines.

[goldenmyst]

SmileGRL, this tickled my fancy. Your poetry is the stuff of dreams.

John