Naked Hands

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Lightning Rod
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Post by Lightning Rod » September 9th, 2008, 10:50 am

Her hands told me
grace with no rings

gestures so fluid
a minuet of fingers
they needed no rings
they needed nothing

manners can be learned
grace cannot
it's natural and nonchalant
never notices itself
Her hands told me

they were louder than the music
ballerinas attached to slender wrists
pas de deux of pink and smooth
Her hands told me.

I went deaf, could see her lips move
but suddenly understood
the words of an older language
fingertalk phalangeal verbs
Her hands told me.

All she had to do was crook her finger.
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by hester_prynne » September 9th, 2008, 12:03 pm

Okay now Lrod, this is some of your best writing.
I love this .....it's beautiful....
H 8)
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Post by Perdida » September 9th, 2008, 5:27 pm

stunning LR, really beautiful writing. Hands can say alot about a person and to a person.

Loved this.

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Post by stilltrucking » September 9th, 2008, 5:44 pm

best one you have done in a long time
ain't it a bitch that you are only as good as your last poem

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Post by Doreen Peri » September 9th, 2008, 5:57 pm

manners can be learned
grace cannot
One would hope, yes.

Nice poem.

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Post by Lightning Rod » September 9th, 2008, 10:40 pm

thank you, ladies

(oops, you too truck)

look quick, I don't get mushy often
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by GodModule » September 12th, 2008, 3:50 pm

Thanks for posting this. Amazing writing, as everyone else has said. I'll be studying this for lessons for my own writing.
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