You never forget

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hester_prynne
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You never forget

Post by hester_prynne » October 11th, 2008, 12:18 am

Six am,
these shoes hurt my feet,
these pants feel weird,
on deconstruction street.

I miss my old place,
in jackpot hindsight,
sure, I was lost,
but I was alright.

Back on track,
on the money train,
a hobo hoppin on,
I musta been insane.

Fancy name tag,
expensive bus pass,
you never forget,
bein out on your ass.

Nothing new anymore,
it's all interpretate.
I'm still a poet baby,
I just work for the state.
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by judih » October 11th, 2008, 12:45 am

doing this gig tonight
playin this part today
i'm working my 'normality' guise
till i can't fake it no more

never fear, i'm still here
just smiling instead of shriekin fuck you
no, not you, but everyone else,
yeah, it's good to share a secret

saw
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Post by saw » October 11th, 2008, 6:36 am

yeah, homelessness is not very appealing....so we jump through the rings, so we can write our poems in a room with electricity....life, like
relationships is full of compromises, which make perfect sense, as long as we don't misplace our soul.........good write
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by Arcadia » October 11th, 2008, 10:51 am

I would be in a real problem if I have to use shoes to go to work!! :shock:

I´ll remember it!!!!! :)

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Post by Nazz » October 11th, 2008, 5:02 pm

ya got soul, Hest..

Thanks for the write. I enjoyed it. I like it when time disappears for a while..

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Post by mtmynd » October 11th, 2008, 6:41 pm

theda da' heata' puttin it to jazz

((italics on purpose))

righteous, hes'...

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