After the Fall

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saw
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After the Fall

Post by saw » October 20th, 2008, 6:11 am

even though
my mind fermented
in a matrix
of varnish-like cocktails
and the patina
of my skin was the color
of puked-on cement,
I refused to feel sorry
for my earlier rapture,
but I did vow
to my fairy godmother
that I would never
behave that way again.
She's still laughing
in between newly
developed perpetual hiccups,
ha ha ha ha ha hick, ha ha
hick hick hick, ha ha ha ha ha.
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by stilltrucking » October 20th, 2008, 8:58 am

6. nice

nice bit of craft

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Post by mousey1 » October 20th, 2008, 11:31 am

Great reading! Good fun.

So long as you didn't take the wheel of your Pumpkin Carriage and try to drive yourself home, it's good to tie one on occasionally...besides, that ol' fairy Godmother begins to look pretty good after a few drinks! :P
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by Nazz » October 20th, 2008, 2:26 pm

Sounds like last Sunday mornin'... And yes, she's still laughing...

hahahahahahahahahahahahah..

saw
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Post by saw » October 22nd, 2008, 3:39 pm

thanx truck, mouse and nazz...just having a little fun...a friend of mine at work and I always say after such an episode,"Man, I learned my lesson!"
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by SmileGRL » October 23rd, 2008, 5:29 pm

bloody mary :wink:

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Post by goldenmyst » October 23rd, 2008, 7:02 pm

Saw, merrily besotted. Though I've never been drunk, your poem almost makes me wanna try. ;)

John

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Post by hester_prynne » October 28th, 2008, 1:54 am

melaffing.
good stuff as usual
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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