Crash and Burn Therapy

[saw]

I've always heard
Eden is a hell of a place,
and well, one night
when I am up there flying
in my imagination,
I'll look down and smile at you,
the view from paradise
is the vista that saved my life,
and don't tell me
I don't have any life skills,
I can read upside down,
no shit darlin'....like it was
right side up and thanks so much
for helping out, you actually
remembered how I begged you
that if I ever started to make sense
you would slap me swiftly and completely,
and you obliged, and you told me
that whenever I was lost in the forest
of doubt and depression, all I gotta do
is turn the stereo on, the music
will do the rest.

[SmileGRL]

aah, music! it's got therapeutic value. singing & dancing. preferrably loud & with a smile. you write real. i like it.

[saw]

yes SmileGRL, smiley music, that should do it....thanx for reading.....

[SmileGRL]

...this poem is about more than the music though...much more...

[goldenmyst]

Saw, this left me wistful and longing. I got the feel of people parting ways. So beautifully written.

John

[saw]

thanx again Smile for the second peek and comment, as well as John, you are always so gracious with your replies....thanx to you both