utter angst

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HELLiocentric
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utter angst

Post by HELLiocentric » November 14th, 2008, 6:14 pm

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Perdida
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Post by Perdida » November 14th, 2008, 6:20 pm

fuuuuck! :D
The path to true love isn't always straight.
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Post by Lightning Rod » November 14th, 2008, 6:21 pm

this is utter plagiarism
I've read this poem under a half-dozen by-lines
I couldn't say who wrote it
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye
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Post by Doreen Peri » November 14th, 2008, 6:22 pm

welcome to the f-ing studio ;)
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Post by constantine » November 15th, 2008, 6:19 pm

he said the f word.
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Post by saw » November 16th, 2008, 2:11 am

all I've got to say is:

penis penis penis
penis
penis penis
penis penis penis penis
penis, penis ( penis)
******penis

and penis******
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Post by mnaz » November 16th, 2008, 2:48 am

that's cheap.

and yet the arrangement is striking, in parts.
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Post by stilltrucking » November 16th, 2008, 9:23 pm

utter angst
shit
and more shit

so keep on fucking
we need the shit
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Post by mnaz » November 16th, 2008, 10:12 pm

shit-and-a-shit-cut
shit shit.

(done to the rhythm of the tune,
"shave and a haircut, two bits")
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