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HELLiocentric
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Post by HELLiocentric » November 14th, 2008, 6:16 pm

the rain undresses;
falls on the naked streets below.
each drop holds images:
stories reflected and contained in the air,
a fragment of breath, an angry word,
a train station farewell.

all these things tumble in droplets
until they land
with painterly precision
on the naked, open canvas
to make every surface shine
like a moonbeam contained.

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Perdida
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Post by Perdida » November 14th, 2008, 6:19 pm

lovely images :D
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Post by SmileGRL » November 21st, 2008, 3:14 pm

you painted a pretty picture...

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