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Totenkopf

Post by Totenkopf » February 20th, 2008, 2:51 am

YOu're quite a vulgar little knave, aren't you, clown? Why don't you mind yr own bidness, 'fore somebody shuts you the F. up, you canadian bag of scheisse. Verstehen zee, dreck? You're an untalented speck of shit.

Erase your garbage and do the site if not world a favor. Or better, be a mensch, step in a ring. legal like, and Ill knock your ass out (and youo DON'T want to escalate anything). I got yr shit bookmarked as well, perp boy and you ought to watch yrself.

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Post by mnaz » February 20th, 2008, 3:15 am

Hey now... this is a Jesus thread... blessed are the peacemakers, and meek shall inherit, and all that, y'know...

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Post by Totenkopf » February 20th, 2008, 3:26 am

Tell that to your psycho palsie (and have him delete his bizarre rant). Wasn't even addressing him, nor was I insulting. He needs help. And alas with the double-digit IQ, he's not even up to producing the HS Thompson type imitations that he dreams of.

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Post by Doreen Peri » February 20th, 2008, 8:51 am

i've gotten a complaint about some of the posts on this thread.

quit attacking each other, ok?

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Post by stilltrucking » February 20th, 2008, 9:05 am

I must have missed it Doreen.

I thought it was an interesting thread.

Group minds scare me.

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Post by stilltrucking » February 20th, 2008, 9:16 am

yeah I missed it
the last few posts
I see what you mean



yes yes yes
pull my daisy
push my button
punch my ticket
trip my trigger

Schools out.
sadism 101
make my day
Mascochist me
Jesus lied for my sins
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Post by stilltrucking » February 20th, 2008, 9:30 am

Jesus is my literary agent
I am going to be a paperback writer

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Post by Axanderdeath » February 20th, 2008, 12:32 pm

Totenkopf wrote:YOu're quite a vulgar little knave, aren't you, clown? Why don't you mind yr own bidness, 'fore somebody shuts you the F. up, you canadian bag of scheisse. Verstehen zee, dreck? You're an untalented speck of shit.

Erase your garbage and do the site if not world a favor. Or better, be a mensch, step in a ring. legal like, and Ill knock your ass out (and youo DON'T want to escalate anything). I got yr shit bookmarked as well, perp boy and you ought to watch yrself.
hge you reading Friedrich Nietzsche in german?? I read some of his stuff. the for dumbies version. you kind of think you the shit don't you.

you got my shit bookmarked? what do you mean by that man?

oh yeah. you think you are some superhuman... is it hard for you to be so much smarter then everyone?

do you get to do things like kill because you are?

grab an axe why don't you smart ass superhuman!

you could teach the guys in jail a thing or two. I am sure thety would love you...

and why you keep bringing up hst when you write about my style? you think I write like him?

you write like a text book. it is boring. you are a stuck up blowhard. you think you know everything. your an asshole. go jack off to Friedrich Nietzsche a little more you sad little man.
thus spoke G.A.P.

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Post by mnaz » February 20th, 2008, 12:48 pm

A textbook? I disagree. More like culture and history integrated into screaming verse. Insanity teamed with intellect. We all have our own style, no?

Besides, what was the subject of the original thread? Jesus... or more to the point, one interpretation of his body of teaching... Jesus can't save the world. That's ultimately up to us. And we dump too many of our own neurotic, apocalyptic religious projections on him, in general. That's evident by the number of emotion-jammed, often virulent responses one gets whenever one posts anything remotely thought-provoking involving Jesus. The man gets a bad rap (as he is largely ignored). I've even gone so far as to write a poem stating flat out that "I hate Jesus", written from inverted perspective, intended as a criticism of self-proclaimed Christian war-mongers. So let's all chill, baby. It ain't that big of a deal. Seriously.

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Post by Axanderdeath » February 20th, 2008, 12:59 pm

mnaz wrote:A textbook? I disagree. More like culture and history integrated into screaming verse. Insanity teamed with intellect. We all have our own style, no?

Besides, what was the subject of the original thread? Jesus... or more to the point, one interpretation of his body of teaching. That Jesus can't save the world... that's ultimately up to us. And that we dump too much of our own neurotic, apocalyptic religious projections on him. The man gets a bad rap. I've even gone so far as to write a poem stating flat out that "I hate Jesus", written from inverted perspective, intended as a criticism of self-proclaimed Christian war-mongers. So let's all chill, baby. It ain't that big of a deal. Seriously.
assholes are assholes. totenkofp is an ass.

I just did not like the way he said "this is not the talent night" or what ever he said... there is no question that he is edugucated and has a high IQ--but that does not make him right about everything. anyway I aM a prick too and enjoy reading the insults that he throughs out. "knave" that was an interesting one. I hope my IQ is in the triple digits.

I am not saying that I hate anyone--jesus seems like he was probally an okay guy--I think bush is a moron, but not satan. I know those guys at poetry readings that scream out "bush is satan" with high nasaly voices and they anoy the fuck out of me--as does most poetry.

and about tokefp atacking my intelligence and saying I lack talent... okay. If i could get through the first paragragh of his thick pompouse overly accademic writen un orgional dated kife I would make comment on his talent.
thus spoke G.A.P.

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Post by Totenkopf » February 20th, 2008, 1:26 pm

and why you keep bringing up hst when you write about my style? you think I write like him?
HST with a lobotomy and with his vocabulary reduced by 1/2. I wasn't addressing you, anyway, Talentnite-axe.

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Post by stilltrucking » February 20th, 2008, 2:54 pm

the thing with nietzsche's super man geoff
it is not that he has power over others
It is that he has power over his own self.

Jesus is easy
he can take care of himself

The question here is not who is smartest
it is about which one of us has the biggest dick
why do you give someone that much power over you.
Somebody likes your writing you feel good'
somebody puts it down you feel bad
Remember ted williams?
No I guess you don"t


I am not sure Bush is not satan
he could be
he could be a death lizard from outer space.
HST thought that Nixon was not human, but he did give him the benefit of the doubt and say he was pretty sure Nixon was at least a mammal.

If you meet buddha on the road kill him
if you meet jesus
if you meet bukowski
if you meet kerouac
if you meet HST
kill them all
kill them
it is what we do best
kill it or fuck it

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Post by Axanderdeath » February 20th, 2008, 3:07 pm

stilltrucking wrote:the thing with nietzsche's super man geoff
it is not that he has power over others
It is that he has power over his own self.

Jesus is easy
he can take care of himself

The question here is not who is smartest
it is about which one of us has the biggest dick
why do you give someone that much power over you.
Somebody likes your writing you feel good'
somebody puts it down you feel bad
Remember ted williams?
No I guess you don"t


I am not sure Bush is not satan
he could be
he could be a death lizard from outer space.
HST thought that Nixon was not human, but he did give him the benefit of the doubt and say he was pretty sure Nixon was at least a mammal.

If you meet buddha on the road kill him
if you meet jesus
if you meet bukowski
if you meet kerouac
if you meet HST
kill them all
kill them
it is what we do best
kill it or fuck it
thanks for clearing up the superman thing.

okay, whatever. still think tokepf is a prick.

and with what you said about supermen. what I was saying is true too. I know.

supermen think that because theyu are sooo smart they can kill the peons
thus spoke G.A.P.

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Post by stilltrucking » February 20th, 2008, 3:18 pm

Ja Ja
we are all pricks
that is why we get into pissing contests.
we are always trying win
to be the biggest prick of all

I never know how to take you sometimes

Totenkopf

Post by Totenkopf » February 20th, 2008, 5:46 pm

supermen think that because theyu are sooo smart they can kill the peons
Heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh. Ansteigen an Die ZUG, Sch____n ! No sense of humor either, like most schmendricks

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