wondering what the hell

[judih]

the problem with writing a down minor key poem is getting such fabulous responses and then i feel good and absolutely without the right to claim the poem as a present moment thing.

so out of character i must moan and bitch about string moods.

in any case, you know what i mean and i'm really quite a bit less cynical now that the poem is out and getting aired.

so many monkey train salutes to you, mingo
and hester, thank you, for taking the many timeser and applying it here.

[SmileGRL]

i ache to be free of strings
and stringlessness
a ball bobbling in a summer's pond
compass set to smile

it seems i'm quoting tonight...haha. love this paragraph judih. you have voiced what a lot of people feel but won't say out loud. to be stringless. to ache. so it's a down minor key poem. and there is nothing wrong with that. enjoy the praise.

[judih]

a right word, smilegrl - how wise you are.
thanks for quoting that little bit of flotation.