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Post by stilltrucking » August 29th, 2008, 3:06 pm

I am confused, I was thinking that song could have inspired the young girls poem because Jerry had to many teeny bopper brides.

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Post by Lightning Rod » August 29th, 2008, 3:10 pm

jack, your brain is shakin' around like a bb in a boxcar

nothing new

doreen, who knows why we are inspired by what? If you care to explain it to me, I have a few days free.
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by Doreen Peri » August 29th, 2008, 3:22 pm

Lrod

I moved your rude comment to Jack to the Dumpster.

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Post by stilltrucking » August 29th, 2008, 3:38 pm

listen clay I would not have known about your rude comment
if doreen had not said something.

I am no curious as to what it is so I wont look in the dumpster

Back off clayh

I am saying please
okay

try not to get so passive agressive

I am a coward clay

that is what makes me so dangerous

I am interested in this conversation

I making my little comments because I am interested

I am not looking for a fight

a debate or anything else

I am or was not being sarcastic
I was not beinng snarky
was just sitting here thinking and writtng

there is nothing you can say that would make you any more frightening

ya know

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Post by Lightning Rod » August 29th, 2008, 3:46 pm

that's right jack
girls don't understand that boys play rough

I'm not passive/aggressive
I'm aggressive/agressive

I don't want a fight with you either
I find your mind to be quirky and interesting

but you will have a fight if you continue to fan these imaginary flames about any disagreement that doreen and I have.
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by stilltrucking » August 29th, 2008, 3:49 pm

I said once I will be friendas with both of you if it kills me clay.

You know where to find me.

I don't own this board
this web site
neither do you

this is doreen's place.

She does not seem to be afraind of you

that's cool

I am
I was joking about the great balls causee I thought it was funny

you do have balls clay

where do you want to take this clay

a pillow fight

what would satisfy that twisted ego of yours

I am sorry I called you a piece of shit with two legs and a pony tail.

stupid thing to say

this spontanesous existentiial strip tease is working with out a net.

now just ignore me clay

if that is what it takes

I am just going to keep coming at you

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Post by stilltrucking » August 29th, 2008, 3:52 pm

listen idiot

that is in your fucking head you paranoid asshole

I am not fanning no flames

I am chatting with a cupple of friends
or so i thought

who the fuuck you think you are
dr freud?

fanning flames :!:

geezus h christ you are ludicrous
why do I even try to make sense with you
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Post by Lightning Rod » August 29th, 2008, 3:53 pm

haha jack, now you got me laughing
the feathers are gonna fly in this pillow fight
don't
stop
don't
stop
don't stop
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Post by stilltrucking » August 29th, 2008, 3:55 pm

good I am glad you got a laugh
best medicine they say
and I agree

love peace and taco grease.

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Post by Doreen Peri » August 29th, 2008, 4:34 pm

ok i can't do this any more.. i should move jack's post too

sighhh

you guys are on your own

lol

fricking internet is a crazy media

so much gets misinterpreted.

Yanno what? I totally understand why Levi decided to change his site. I *got* it .... just within the past week or two. I figured it out.

and I understand why other sites have rules and teams of moderators and all that

AND I understand the title to this poem... "Lotta Bull"


:D

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Post by Lightning Rod » August 29th, 2008, 4:43 pm

yeah, I thought that the title was fitting too

should have called it Lotta Bullshit
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Post by stilltrucking » August 29th, 2008, 5:37 pm

nothing but male agression Doreen this is what it has been about all along. Male agression.

Same sheet differnt day Clay

I got a six degree thing going with The Killer. They say he is the original O J, not sure how many of those young girl brides he murdered, probably just dark rumours.

So I was wondering about the mack the kniffe thing, and I was wondering about doreen's question which you never answerred what has that song go to do with the poem.
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Post by stilltrucking » August 29th, 2008, 5:42 pm

("Your sister's dead", Jerry Lee said to Denise Stevens the day after Shawn's bruised and bloodied corpse was discovered, "and she was a bad girl"). Come now, you don't think Tosches could keep silent about the Killer's Killings, do you?
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Post by constantine » August 29th, 2008, 6:23 pm

i've been thinking about this recurrent theme and have come to the conclusion that the art would be better served if we focus on a poem as an individual entity - as if it were written anonymously without hidden agenda. if we deal with the individual merits of an individual poem a lot of this extraneous bullshit might be averted.

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Post by stilltrucking » August 29th, 2008, 6:32 pm

It was a good question dino I was just interested.


I guess the connection between the poem and the song was the word

"Lotta"

lotta bull

lotta shaking.

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