Stealing Passion (Short Story)

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stilltrucking
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Post by stilltrucking » August 10th, 2005, 6:11 pm

now i feel like a turd somany promises broke to him when i was on the road, it is a wonder that the kid believes anything i say, should have been there for him instead of sitting here with my thumb up my ass, vanity just my got dam vanity :evil: :twisted: :cry:

so now I sit and wait hoping he got the job

they ought to take a fuking rope and hang me

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stilltrucking
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Post by stilltrucking » August 10th, 2005, 6:38 pm

Still I like it and I think its as good as any thing I read, so easy to criticize but harder to create perfection one's self. "C"
Listen I liked the story a hell of a lot, think it is the best thing I have read in weeks,

you made a comment about how stilltrucking keeps this place going, I got to tell you he is LHAO, laughing his ass off right now because of that. He asked if you were trying to blow smoke up his ass

is that honest enough, man I love your stuff, but it is the personal stuff that i don't get, all the issues you have. that's all just a personal problem with me. I been working on suicide story my self about and old man walking on a beach, his lungs full of cancer and his pocket fulll of rocks. I will probably never get around to wrting it, you ten times the writer I am, maybe you will write my life story for me.

I wanted to jam with you little brother sorry i missed yu
got to go get some smokes.

later

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