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on Sunday morning waking up

Posted: July 15th, 2007, 10:29 am
by joel
Its perfect darkness bleached— a brighter hue
than sleep prefers. I looked for you beside
me— where you yesterday reposed, but now
that space was empty and your bedclothes, drawn
and squared, amazed me by the mess
of sheets as yet I wore. Did you escape
before I noticed that you rose and blew
as breezes; was I ignorant of you?
I pulled my eyelid shades and traced your shape
where it had been – where it belonged – to bless
myself, to comfort thoughts of you. But dawn
persisted. You were gone, removed: and how
I missed you. How I wept. How I’d confide
complexities of freedom from, to you.

Posted: July 15th, 2007, 11:36 am
by Lightning Rod
pardon my french, joel
but this is fuckin beautiful
made my Sunday morning

Posted: July 16th, 2007, 4:30 pm
by hester_prynne
Indeed, a regenerating read, most appreciated.
H

Posted: July 21st, 2007, 6:01 pm
by Perdida
I wish i had written this. Ya good, verrrry goooood.
How do you manage to pop so many of these beauties out?

grins

P :wink: