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bethany
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(I couldn't think of a title...)

Post by bethany » October 13th, 2007, 12:53 am

So it seems that I'm in love.
this thing without description.
But I can't place what stands wrong.
Just... there without an explanation.

Is it that my eyes are the wrong color,
Bright green instead of a deep, sea blue?
Or maybe my hair is the wrong length...
oh please, just give me a clue.

But I can't pretend that I don't care
if you feel repulsed when holding my hand.
If you don't want me, then don't have me.
And I'll be free to run to a faraway land.

I'll join Peter Pan and never look back,
to this horrible thing you call "reality."
You'll try to stop me, but I'll fight back.
Fly second star to the right and Straight on until Insanity.

Possibly fly with Tinkerbell,
Or, maybe, swim with mermaids.
I'll fight beside Peter against Captain Hook,
and we'll use the indians as our aids.

But... just as the fairytale goes,
in the end I must go home.
To live my life as just another girl,
who, in the end, is all alone.



-*note*-
please tell me if this makes any sense what-so-ever.
-thank you. <3
It was the dance that lasted a lifetime, but ended in an eye-blink.

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Post by stilltrucking » October 13th, 2007, 2:11 am

I thought it made a lot of sense

thank you

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Post by joel » October 16th, 2007, 6:07 pm

what doesn't make sense to me is this: why would anyone have a problem with verdant green eyes? not that i have anything against the blues or browns or hazels or slates...but the greens? c'mon. they're green!

i think this makes a lot of sense--ditto still.
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Post by Totenkopf » November 1st, 2007, 11:59 pm

Is it that my eyes are the wrong color,
Bright green instead of a deep, sea blue?

I've heard rumor that the gods of poesy adore Green eyes.......

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Post by jimboloco » November 2nd, 2007, 12:30 pm

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why does peter pan never crash?
he can never never land

why is cinderalla a lousy athlete?
her coach is a pumpkin

why was i condemned to unrequited love?
i gave up trying and made friends with my failures
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by ~K » November 3rd, 2007, 9:10 pm

"I'll join Peter Pan and never look back"

I applaud all attempts
to never ever look back

Never...hmmmm

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