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mindbum
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facile validity; valid facility

Post by mindbum » October 24th, 2007, 3:27 pm

i'm lefthanded still
& sick of not doing things

warm day in the sun
over a steady bridge
not to burn
when ye come to it

an example
of forward motion
on valid architecture
& facile engineering

of a descent
below the bricks
to hit

you walk the same
no matter
which hand ye have
to write with.
godless & songless, western man dances with the stuffed gorilla through all the blind alleys of a dead-end world.

-maxwell bodenheim

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Post by e_dog » October 27th, 2007, 3:47 am

GREAT TILE, NICE LINE, INTRIGUING QUOTES. WELL DONE, MINDBUM.
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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