Winged ascension, butterfly flip-flop flight

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joel
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Winged ascension, butterfly flip-flop flight

Post by joel » October 30th, 2007, 2:04 pm

Winged ascension, butterfly flip-flop flight—
iambic pentameter aside, I
ride as smoothly unidirectional
and as steadily ahead as any
bicycled manpower cobblestone road
allows me travel: jagged, jumpy joy
of but a bit more freedom, liberty—
within the lines only literally,
an internal vacation to enjoy
supernal variation ’til I goad
myself to order once again; many
thanks for haphazard, unconventional
harlequineity of butterfly
ventures—the journey’s been a vast delight.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by Doreen Peri » October 30th, 2007, 2:21 pm

i love the alliteration in this... and the rhythm.

have you ever considered writing song lyrics?

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Post by Arcadia » October 30th, 2007, 8:19 pm

within the lines only literally,
an internal vacation to enjoy


wow!! it sounds like a great ride!!!

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