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Up to you

Posted: November 9th, 2007, 6:10 pm
by hester_prynne
Black crow
landed on my shoulder.
Ghostlike,
peripheral apparition.
Gave me
seeeeeeeeee-thru eyes,
straight through
to your sins.
They were floating,
face up,
in a pool of guilt,
around your soul,
which drained a little bit,
under my direct gaze.
Emptying it completely,
however,
will be up to you.

Posted: November 9th, 2007, 6:26 pm
by Doreen Peri
fabulous piece

i love this!

Posted: November 9th, 2007, 7:05 pm
by mousey1
Perfect.

Posted: November 11th, 2007, 5:38 am
by mnaz
and you as well...

piercing read, hest. that is what you do, and well.

Posted: November 11th, 2007, 7:19 am
by Dave The Dov
Nevermore!!!!
_________________
Ariakon SIM-5

Posted: November 11th, 2007, 8:25 am
by stilltrucking
excellent write
I can use this one





you are my favorite star gazer Theda
thank you

Posted: November 11th, 2007, 11:06 am
by Totenkopf
Re: "Up in you"

Well-done, H. Rather superior to say the usual Gary Muledeer metaphysics.

Posted: November 16th, 2007, 6:10 pm
by Perdida
Oh my, this rocks!

love it

:D