Page 1 of 1

fictive romance

Posted: November 11th, 2007, 5:44 pm
by e_dog
We slept together on the bus.
You were about three rows ahead.

For twenty minutes at least
I watched you in an angular profile
nodding asleep while holding a book
till it fell
and you fell
asleep.

And i fell
asleep.

When I woke up it was dark outside
and you had already gotten off
at an earlier stop.

Posted: November 12th, 2007, 3:29 am
by mnaz
Ah, the endless burbs and suburbs, so full of sleep deficit and numb possibility...

Posted: November 12th, 2007, 12:59 pm
by Totenkopf
Interesting, like from the "Collected works of John Hinckley........"

Posted: November 13th, 2007, 12:09 am
by e_dog
that's where i found it!

not quoted in full.

The first stanza is:

Hello, I love you
won't you tell me your party affiliation?

Posted: November 24th, 2007, 10:49 pm
by Doreen Peri
nice sketch.. i saw it