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If we lost the war

Posted: November 14th, 2007, 5:45 am
by mnaz
Reality is a volcano on the verge, like Saint Helens.
Madness ruins beauty and beauty flows quietly from madness,
polyrhythmic and poly-modal in poly-orbit, and circles in poly-circles,
and the great species are algae blooms glued to an ageless rock arc,
rock art of kingdoms like a half tick, full of erosion and gain and truth,
like an earthquake out in crushing absolute zero with the stars out.
If we don't win this war I'll be forced to speak Russian.
So then how do you say "kiss my ass" in Russian?
If we win I'll be forced to speak absolute zero,
with the stars out.

Posted: November 14th, 2007, 1:31 pm
by Arcadia
absolute zero and russian!!...they look as complicated first sight options... I can“t help you with russian...(pravda and niet are the only words I know...!)
interesting writing!! :)

Posted: November 14th, 2007, 1:51 pm
by mnaz
wow... interesting possibilities here...
yeah.... I was reeaally tired last night.

Thanks Arcadia.

Posted: November 21st, 2007, 10:42 pm
by e_dog
excelent pome.

Posted: November 24th, 2007, 5:13 pm
by mnaz
Thanks. I was thinking of a hypothetical earthquake somewhere in the starlit mountains of Pluto (would it make a sound?), and somehow this came out...

Posted: November 25th, 2007, 5:59 pm
by jimboloco
breathtaking

Posted: November 26th, 2007, 5:44 pm
by e_dog
if a regime falls in burma does it make a sound in america?

if a man is tortured in cia blacksites in europa, afrika, anywhere, do we even kno?

Posted: November 26th, 2007, 9:07 pm
by hester_prynne
Gott damned fantastic read mnaz.
Yeah.

H 8)