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not torture

Posted: November 22nd, 2007, 4:15 am
by e_dog
i'm addicted to the sadness
you left me
with.

leaning over
the edge,
filling the abyss
with tears.

i plunge
my
face in
to drown
but cough on
memories
of laughter.

and have to
come up
for air.

Posted: November 24th, 2007, 11:27 am
by Maggie
I have read a couple of your other pieces as well as this one . You do quite well with this form . I enjoyed this a great deal .

Posted: November 26th, 2007, 1:14 am
by e_dog
thanks for reading.