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postulating the availability of a microvisionary outlook...

Post by mtmynd » December 9th, 2007, 2:23 pm

postulating the availability of a microvisionary outlook at 11:14p.m.


like organic alfalfa honey

spilled on a cold concrete floor

i no longer move -

the doors have been sealed with comfort

and the mechanical noises outside

stay there -

polyvisual television screams

thru the muted button

worn from the race to silence -

i sunbathe in the nude

under candlelight of hush

counting binary geckos

seeking a live meal

fed digitally one bit at a time ~

my voice mimicking a keyboard

splintered by jackboots of thought

running loose from my fingertips

reinterpreting santini's black cape

into six twirling dervishes screwing

on a fake persian carpet from mexico.

i no longer choose a path

but opt for deep sleep dreams

at one with my throaty snore.


cecil

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Post by Arcadia » December 9th, 2007, 3:36 pm

sweet dreams!!

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Re: postulating the availability of a microvisionary outlook

Post by Lightning Rod » December 9th, 2007, 10:11 pm

mtmynd wrote:
the doors have been sealed with comfort
I like this one cec
bold and has good tension
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by stilltrucking » December 10th, 2007, 10:01 am

ten four on the tension
thanks for the poem Cecil
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Post by hester_prynne » December 10th, 2007, 5:01 pm

utterly fantastic read Cec...

humbled,
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by mtmynd » December 11th, 2007, 1:45 am

I appreciate the replies. TY!

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Post by judih » December 11th, 2007, 2:28 am

fabulous journey through your mind
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flow with snapshots of thoroughly dense lifeclips

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