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Arcadia
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only three days!!!!!!

Post by Arcadia » December 21st, 2007, 5:27 pm

very humid hot weather
(this really seems to be the topic)
multiple strikes
street persa-markets
(for a moment you think that you are
near the northern border)
a marcha
(you count the years)
kids wanting to sell you a magazine
kids wanting a smile and a coin
a zero coke plastic-glass publicity at the corner
a tramp sleeping at the entrance
of a very glamorous cell-phone shop
jazmins
too much people
too much sunny streets
(we all laught with a young salesman
pretending to howl in a chocolate store)
traffic without control
electric generators in some streets
(I remember to have seen
more cotton-snow when a was a kid)
lost messages
low tension
(we communicate somehow)
santa
forever sweating.


mucho calor y humedad
(esto parece ser realmente el tema de conversación)
paros múltiples
mercado persa en las calles
(por un momento pensás que estás
en la triple frontera)
una marcha
(contás los años)
chicos tratando de venderte una revista
chicos queriendo una sonrisa y una moneda
un vaso de publicidad de coca-zero en una esquina
un vagabundo durmiendo
a la entrada de un elegante negocio
de teléfonos celulares
jasmines
demasiada gente
demasiadas calles soleadas
(todos reímos junto a un joven
vendedor que pretende aullar
en un negocio de chocolates)
tráfico sin control
generadores eléctricos en algunas calles
(recuerdo haber visto más algodón-nieve
cuendo era chica)
mensajes perdidos
baja tensión
(nos comunicamos de algún modo)
Papá Noel
transpirando por siempre.

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mnaz
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Location: north of south

Post by mnaz » December 22nd, 2007, 4:24 am

Xmas is such a Northern Hemisphere thing, ain't it?

"santa
forever sweating."

Perfect.

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