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Narcissistic Coffee
Posted: January 30th, 2008, 5:06 pm
by mnaz
God created man in its image.
War created peace in its image.
Sound created fury in its image.
Fiction created truth in its image.
Cure created disease in its image.
Art created nonsense in its image.
History created history in its image.
And vice versa.
Posted: January 30th, 2008, 6:25 pm
by mnaz
cet etera
wow.... this doesn't even make any sense!
vive le' poetricky!!!
Posted: January 30th, 2008, 11:08 pm
by Doreen Peri
i like the title.
Posted: January 30th, 2008, 11:32 pm
by e_dog
groovy.
wisdom.
Posted: January 30th, 2008, 11:50 pm
by judih
expression makes espresso
and vice versa
Posted: January 31st, 2008, 7:24 pm
by stilltrucking
Desire created suffering
Narcissus had an Echo
And a mirror Image
makes no sense to me
Why narcissus gets all the ink
poor echo
such a silly girl
nice poem
please pardon the ramble
had nothing to do with your pome
the title just triggered the myth
as if that meant anything.
Posted: January 31st, 2008, 7:50 pm
by stilltrucking
sorry mnaz I should delete my reply
I am so got dam narcissistic
Man creates woman in the image of my desire
It was a dam good poem and I tried to make too much sense of it.
sorry
The best line for me was
" Art created nonsense in its image. "
Posted: February 1st, 2008, 3:42 am
by hester_prynne
Personally, I go for this in the vice versa.
Which probably explains alot. Heh.
Either way though, I dig it.
H
Posted: February 1st, 2008, 2:02 pm
by mnaz
Yeh, that version ain't bad either, I guess...
Man created god in its image.
Peace created war in its image.
Fury created sound in its image.
Truth created fiction in its image.
Disease created cure in its image.
Nonsense created art in its image.
History created history in its image.
y verse vice-a.
(gotta verse vice...)
Posted: February 1st, 2008, 4:23 pm
by mtmynd
"man created god in its image" can certainly be verified.
nice write, mnaz... a why knot.
Posted: February 1st, 2008, 4:40 pm
by gypsyjoker
a why knot jam
it is a flip flop
a terra flop
it is a ying yang
a woman or a man
a digital mind
it is on it is off
up or down
forward or back
good or evil
dead or alive
I am stoned again
I guess you couldn't tell
...
Posted: February 1st, 2008, 4:48 pm
by bennie2
Man looks into his narcissistic coffee
sees himself beautiful
chops a rib from his deity-side
and casts a woman's shadow
man looks into his narcissistic coffee
sees his eye reflection
bitter caffiene wow relflection
coffee breath, new woman shadow, skin
man looks into his narcissistic coffee and overthrows the hours
Posted: February 2nd, 2008, 2:15 am
by Axanderdeath
i was crying
masturbating
looking in the mirror
thinking about how
wrong everybody was
and is
I come and see these
life force extracted
and everyone seemed to
have contracted
the same thoughts
collective
god like
jesus complex
how complex
thankx
GAP
Posted: February 2nd, 2008, 10:22 am
by tinkerjack
Geof it seems like every
think I know is wrong
So much of what I learned in school relating to the life sciences is outdated, outmoded, and just wrong. So much of what was mysterious when I took biology is now known, or so the priests in white lab coats tell me now.
Weismann talked about the continuity of germ plasm. If I remember correctly he said germ plasm is immortal. a bit of always survives into the next generation.
Sorry for the lecture.
Mirror's spook me these days
no bullshit geof
a dam good write
I would call it a poem except that I don't know jack shit about poetry.
Weismann advocated the germ plasm theory, according to which (in a multicellular organism) inheritance only takes place by means of the germ cells—the gametes such as egg cells and sperm cells
Posted: February 2nd, 2008, 10:25 am
by tinkerjack
Beautiful poem bennie
It touched me.
I feel twenty years younger
thank you for writing