Next is where

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hester_prynne
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Next is where

Post by hester_prynne » March 10th, 2008, 5:54 am

Breaking through
new ice
that's cropped up.

Frozen words,
I'm impatient to thaw.

Neutral temperatures,
nowhere to be found.

I'm in quicksand,
at a crossroads.

Tropical delusions,
arrow to the right.

Blood lines,
lead me to where I left.

Straight ahead,
takes care
of itself.

Behind me,
gets me here.

Next is where.
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by stilltrucking » March 10th, 2008, 12:06 pm

it is a gift you have

Hester wrote
Next is where.
I am so happy you put a period after, where.

Behind me
people who say don't look back never dead headed in a Wisconsin blizzard.

Thinking about something doreen wrote recently about doors, the ones that open in our dreams.

rammble ramble
thunder and rain here
thanks for the poem

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Post by constantine » March 12th, 2008, 9:15 pm

cool. i like your work. intelligent - well crafted.

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Post by Lightning Rod » March 12th, 2008, 9:51 pm

the heart has weather
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by constantine » March 12th, 2008, 10:18 pm

scarlet letter, A?

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