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Next is where

Posted: March 10th, 2008, 5:54 am
by hester_prynne
Breaking through
new ice
that's cropped up.

Frozen words,
I'm impatient to thaw.

Neutral temperatures,
nowhere to be found.

I'm in quicksand,
at a crossroads.

Tropical delusions,
arrow to the right.

Blood lines,
lead me to where I left.

Straight ahead,
takes care
of itself.

Behind me,
gets me here.

Next is where.

Posted: March 10th, 2008, 12:06 pm
by stilltrucking
it is a gift you have

Hester wrote
Next is where.
I am so happy you put a period after, where.

Behind me
people who say don't look back never dead headed in a Wisconsin blizzard.

Thinking about something doreen wrote recently about doors, the ones that open in our dreams.

rammble ramble
thunder and rain here
thanks for the poem

Posted: March 12th, 2008, 9:15 pm
by constantine
cool. i like your work. intelligent - well crafted.

Posted: March 12th, 2008, 9:51 pm
by Lightning Rod
the heart has weather

Posted: March 12th, 2008, 10:18 pm
by constantine
scarlet letter, A?