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Dark Hunch

Posted: March 20th, 2008, 9:22 pm
by westcoast
It could have been an accident
Beaten black and blue by old habits
A deadbeat with marvelous potential
An urban wordsmith, scratch poet
Lost in a life of subtle performance
As a blackballed artist

Posted: March 20th, 2008, 9:35 pm
by Lightning Rod
who are you?...my biographer?

Posted: March 20th, 2008, 10:01 pm
by westcoast
pick a number!

*lol*

Posted: March 20th, 2008, 10:26 pm
by stilltrucking

Posted: March 22nd, 2008, 9:21 pm
by westcoast
the square root of god - egads! a mis shapen tuber?

enjoyed the "i" of it

Posted: March 22nd, 2008, 11:16 pm
by Terri
YOW!!! I love this site. Went to your "i" thing, stilltrucking; man. That was pretty good. And westcoast, I like this poem. I agree w/ LR; feels like biography to me.

Posted: March 23rd, 2008, 5:16 pm
by Cenacle
"scratch poet" "blackballed artist" I like this phases in particular from this poem...seems like there is a story behind it?

Posted: March 23rd, 2008, 5:23 pm
by westcoast
years ago i read a piece about a poet whose creative and personal life went to hell in hand basket, a tragedy. the poem flowed from it. don't recall his name. i found it quite sad. so yes, it is biographical.

~west

Posted: March 23rd, 2008, 6:34 pm
by Totenkopf
booj-wah frauds and scenesters who-wannabe-TSELiot luv poesy: . Real scribes do prose :twisted:

Posted: March 23rd, 2008, 6:38 pm
by westcoast
*lol*

Posted: March 23rd, 2008, 6:41 pm
by mnaz
..wannabe-TSEliot luv poesy..

Is that a dark hunch?

Posted: March 23rd, 2008, 6:56 pm
by Totenkopf
More of a proposition, even a verifiable one, than hunch. I respect authentic poets. As Ez Pound asserted, however, the authentic poet knows a lot--two or three languages, and all the requisite Kultural stuff. These days "poet" includes about any dweeb (or dweebette) who shows up to talent nite at Tony's pizzeria and bleats out "I really f-n hate Bush". It's a noble's sport really: more like Bach than bobby dylan.

Posted: March 23rd, 2008, 7:01 pm
by westcoast
what a load. prove to me that historically most of the known great poets were fluent in several languages?

where is your poem? i liked it. please repost so that we can observe, appreciate and critique your awe-inspiring magnificence.

thanking you in advance :D

~westcoast

Posted: March 23rd, 2008, 7:09 pm
by Totenkopf
Poet I am not. On occasion I scribble parodies of poesy. In regards to language skills of poets , ah suggest you peruse some of Pound's literary essays. Even most of the "beats" were fairly well read in french, as well as English. Pound and Eliot knew classical latin as well as other romantic tongues, Deutsch. The typical renaissance scribe--say like Shakespeare or Herrick---knew Latin, greek, italian, etc. Anglo-ish is not really even a official language, arguably. 8) It's from plattdeutsch (sort of flatlander, farmer speak) with lots of loan words from latin and old frankish. Jus sayin'. We wuz robbed.

Posted: March 23rd, 2008, 7:13 pm
by westcoast
I read Bukowski in French in Quebec City, was the first time I really understood what he was saying. Resulted in a fetish. I'm anglo.

~westie