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The Destroyer
Posted: March 24th, 2008, 8:57 pm
by westcoast
Skid Row, his Ganges
This place
a pyre without a procession
Fire engines wail
along its holy banks
Human dogs skulk, skinny
A drunk lies unconscious
spread like Jesus
On a filthy cot
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Posted: March 24th, 2008, 9:12 pm
by constantine
wow westie, i've really been enjoying your work. very hip.
Posted: March 24th, 2008, 9:22 pm
by westcoast
hey thanks!
~w
Posted: March 24th, 2008, 10:32 pm
by sooZen
great graphic images! It does seem unfinished somehow like there is more to come (isn't there always?)

i would love to see you expound upon this for i want more porridge please...
Posted: March 25th, 2008, 12:51 am
by westcoast
thanks, sooZen. my inspiration is usually of short bursts.
i don't know that i could ever write a lengthy poetry. my thought processes are wired differently now from years of crisis and issues management, social marketing, propaganda writing, public relations and other forms of mass communications. i think, resolve and move on in rapid fashion.
certainly something to try

a new challenge. thank you for the thought.
~westcoast
Posted: March 25th, 2008, 10:05 pm
by sooZen
I should talk...except for my prose i am basically a haijin and how short can you get? Hah.
i guess i liked this so much, like a good movie, i didn't want it to end.
