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you came to visit
Posted: March 29th, 2008, 12:34 am
by judih
i was lying on a Friday futon
under the sweet fan of ceiling swirl
and i remembered how you came to visit
on such days as these
how you'd smile your way into my fantasies
jokes and innuendo paving the way
that way of yours
that link of ours
the sweet dissolve of distance
till distance did dissolve us
those years grew wings
as today you came to visit
and how sweet the coming was
march 28/08
Posted: March 29th, 2008, 12:41 am
by westcoast
oooooh, so sweet
loved it
~westcoast
Posted: March 29th, 2008, 2:20 am
by WIREMAN
always a treat j....
Posted: March 29th, 2008, 3:51 am
by judih
glad for the sharing
thanks, janet and mark
Posted: March 31st, 2008, 11:23 am
by sooZen
the sweet dissolve of distance
till distance did dissolve us
ahh yes...dissolving is solved. hah.
Posted: March 31st, 2008, 11:31 am
by judih
resolving solution
how long ago it was
- newsolving (evolving)
Posted: March 31st, 2008, 11:33 am
by Doreen Peri
how did i miss this?
nice, judih!
very nice!
till distance did dissolve us
those years grew wings
i love that!
Posted: March 31st, 2008, 1:25 pm
by Lightning Rod
this is a smooth as warm lotion, judih
Posted: March 31st, 2008, 1:27 pm
by constantine
nice interplay between and within the lines. very polished.
Posted: March 31st, 2008, 10:23 pm
by judih
thnx for the sweet responses
dor, dissolve is my middle name
l-rod, i'd say the lotion's on me, but i don't do double entendres at this time of morning
constantine - polished! it does sound as if it took work.
it didn't - i was just describing a vision - no work at all on my part!
thanks, anyway
Posted: March 31st, 2008, 10:47 pm
by Lightning Rod
judhi
look at it this way double entendres are good any time of the day considering time-zone
but this statement, 'no work at all on my part' is so close to my heart
I always try to put my greatest effort into making things look effortless
(I hate to let anyone see me work)
Posted: April 1st, 2008, 8:33 am
by Doreen Peri
Lightning Rod wrote:
this statement, 'no work at all on my part' is so close to my heart
I always try to put my greatest effort into making things look effortless
(I hate to let anyone see me work)
You know the best way to achieve this, right? Sure you do.