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Fostoria fields

Posted: April 23rd, 2008, 2:10 pm
by jweeble
Fields of crystal
skeletal limbs stretch
touching icy winter sun
crystalline wrappings

haiku first - but also...

among fields of crystal
the skeletal limbs stretch
desperately imploring
the icy winter sun
to dabble her golden-tinged fingers
through their
crystalline-wrapped hair
to release, relax
even as it takes away
their shine.

Posted: April 23rd, 2008, 5:09 pm
by mnaz
i can't help but notice,
but life seems desperate.
and this was always how it should be.

Posted: April 23rd, 2008, 7:08 pm
by WIREMAN
yes sizzlin' on the fringe............

Posted: April 26th, 2008, 1:29 am
by westcoast
a gorgeous visual :) nice work, jw.

~westcoast

Posted: April 26th, 2008, 8:49 pm
by hester_prynne
Totally dig this!!!!!!!!!!!
H 8)

Posted: April 27th, 2008, 12:07 am
by mtmynd
i concur with the prior 6 repliers.

nicely said.