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the only place
Posted: April 26th, 2008, 11:09 pm
by WIREMAN
on the fringe
the razor's flip
binge across
from the bar
the clearness
comes closer
(literal translations
are not needed for
this piece)
on the edge of
the milky way
facing forward
clock tick tick
ticking away
it's what you got
your best shot
the only one
the well done
for it's raining
tonight
time for circling
the wagons
sink or swim
Posted: April 26th, 2008, 11:20 pm
by Artguy
time on a razors' edge....great piece wireman...
Posted: April 26th, 2008, 11:22 pm
by WIREMAN
thanks kurt
just hangin across from
my favorite bar
on my stoop
pondering the cyber fringe
a lil tuned but together
thanks for responding to
this 1st thought piece
Posted: April 26th, 2008, 11:28 pm
by constantine
nice, wireman. it is raining tonight in my fucking head. circling the wagons - the circles get smaller and smaller like the rings of a bullseye.
Posted: April 26th, 2008, 11:38 pm
by westcoast
nice one, wireman
sounds like fun

Posted: April 26th, 2008, 11:40 pm
by constantine
hi westie.
Posted: April 26th, 2008, 11:52 pm
by westcoast
hey! come Jam in the Go! forum. i'm making a coffee and then I'm ready to GO!!!! 10 minutes dudes! be there or be SQUARE.
~go westie
Posted: April 27th, 2008, 12:01 am
by mtmynd
que chingon, wired, mi amigo!

Posted: April 27th, 2008, 8:54 pm
by WIREMAN
thanks for the cool responses
westie....dino.....and cecil
sorry i missed the chance to jam
last night, partying got in the way

Posted: April 28th, 2008, 6:00 am
by gypsyjoker
Sink or swim
Ride or slide
Beyond the fringe
Slip down the razors edge
Clock tick tick
Ticking away
Literally
Well-done wireman
Posted: April 28th, 2008, 9:57 am
by WIREMAN
i feel the power jack...........
Posted: April 28th, 2008, 12:11 pm
by gypsyjoker
I can see the time mark
But I am still powerless