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fondling thought with hybrid wings from angelic whispers
Posted: May 3rd, 2008, 7:59 pm
by mtmynd
fondling thought with hybrid wings from angelic whispers
i've sailed the several sees
of many dichotomies
found refuge in lobotomies
silenced thru trichotomies
counted in threes
upon my knees
before I sneeze
all my philosophies
seizing the astrologies
seen by astronomies
leaving me within a freeze
that I can barely wheeze
but just listen to my pleas
please... please... please
this is not a tease
but a self-analyses
of things you
truly mean to me
so we can be
in the cosmic sea
sharing our love
for all eternity.
Posted: May 3rd, 2008, 8:27 pm
by constantine
this rhymes. and it's maudlin. maybe a new title. maybe not. i find it entertaining. but perhaps that was not your purpose.
Posted: May 3rd, 2008, 8:36 pm
by Lightning Rod
constantine wrote:this rhymes. and it's maudlin. maybe a new title. maybe not. i find it entertaining. but perhaps that was not your purpose.
ouch!
Posted: May 3rd, 2008, 8:39 pm
by constantine
hi clay. just fuckin around. not much to do in dayton, ohwhyoh.
Posted: May 3rd, 2008, 8:46 pm
by gypsyjoker
pretty poem mtmynd
Posted: May 3rd, 2008, 8:51 pm
by constantine
courage, gypsy boy. i'm taking this much too personal. sonny, he's taking it far too personal. you're out tom. you are not a wartime consigliere. gypsy, we're bigger than us steel.
Posted: May 3rd, 2008, 8:54 pm
by gypsyjoker
don't mind me
I am just fondling
a poem
Posted: May 3rd, 2008, 8:55 pm
by constantine
mtmynd, sorry for the intrusion. manic phase. enjoyed your poem. i know - dull reply, but the truth nonetheless. the above comment was an inside joke between clay and me (and all you good people out there in tv land.)
Posted: May 3rd, 2008, 8:58 pm
by constantine
don't know what got into me. would delete but don't know how.
Posted: May 3rd, 2008, 9:08 pm
by westcoast
bee's knees, mtmynd

enjoyed,
~westie
Posted: May 3rd, 2008, 9:33 pm
by Lightning Rod
dino, why would you want to delete this kind of fun?
Posted: May 3rd, 2008, 9:50 pm
by mtmynd
constantine : "
this rhymes. and it's maudlin. maybe a new title. maybe not. i find it entertaining. but perhaps that was not your purpose."
i'm disappointed in them words outta you. not a bit original at all. sounds exactly like something i was reading amongst replies yesterday. i know you can do so much better, buddy, if your pomes are any indication of your originality. but then again, we all can't be what others expect all the time now, can we ?
L'Rod : "
ouch!"
an understood reaction to a sharp pain.
(place a positive looking emoticon here.)
gj : "
don't mind me; I am just fondling a poem"
great line! makes my poem horny, you bastard!
(pls don't take that remark seriously. you know i kid!)
J : "
bee's knees"
i was >>>>
this close <<<< to making some cheap comment about eating bees because of this. but i'm a better person than that... especially around honest women.

Thx, kid!
Posted: May 3rd, 2008, 10:19 pm
by constantine
no more deletions for me. i've reformed - remade remodeled. cpl593h. anyone into roxy music?
Posted: May 3rd, 2008, 10:23 pm
by mtmynd
c : "
anyone into roxy music?"
i'm more of a van morrison-type guy in my private moments of escape and/or despair.

Posted: May 3rd, 2008, 10:42 pm
by constantine
he's cool. like all of his stuff. st. dominic's preview, into the mystic - a great stylist.