Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

qualtrane


she speaks in nuances
that transcend logic
underestimating the value
of disbelief as a rusty token
given to the gutter in exchange
for a dream of complete nakedness

juxtaposition

freedom

is

lonely

if

you

can't

share

it

by mtmynd on August 29, 2003 20:47:00

cool

gaw'lie, gj! dang near 5 years ago!! i think it's still good, don't you? wow. you're something else... and don't let them tell you otherwise now, hear?

thx, J. but yet another brief moment of word play that seemingly rattles the inner cage until they are turned into sounds flying randomly off in directions unknown to anyone or anything but themselves. ((:roll: ))

Yes I may be something else, but you did not mention what

Something sounded familiar about the title
(oh lordy, not titles again he says to him self)

So I googled it and found the next poem you wrote after that and juxtaposed it. I been into juxtapositions lately.

To bad those litkicks archives don't go back to 1999 when we first met here on the net.

i keep coming back to this which tells me in and of itself that it has a poetic allure.

gawwali train
where would i be
without my can't
live with 'em
can't live with out
woman, right now
she's over @ the
bar grazing on
cilantro drinking the
fruit of the vine

that seems like a fair exchange.