silent talking

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jweeble
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silent talking

Post by jweeble » May 5th, 2008, 10:04 am

cinquain chains

Silent Talking
I say.
You see lips move,
hear my voice rise and fall,
understand nothing except that
I spoke.

Listen.
My heart screams out
in anguish with wants, needs.
Whispers quietly to your soul,
"Please hear."

Walls built
from bricks of hurt
and salty-tears mortar
are breached by simple vibrations
of sound.
immeasurable...illogical...infinity squared

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Post by Arcadia » May 5th, 2008, 1:53 pm

understand nothing except that
I spoke


beautiful, jweeble!!!!!!! :)

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Post by sooZen » May 6th, 2008, 10:34 am

very nice stanzas...the beautiful and melancholy echoes of ethos.
I like. :D
Freedom's just another word...



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