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expert on everything

Posted: May 5th, 2008, 3:45 pm
by bennie2
armchair fucking critic
stuck in the rut of his own arse crack
his cheeks are carved in the cushion

Posted: May 5th, 2008, 7:35 pm
by gypsyjoker
he knows women
got to wisecrack the whip
on their ass
keep them in line


just inspired by your little ditty
thanks

Posted: May 5th, 2008, 10:38 pm
by westcoast
keep dat pimp hand strong
space cowboy

Posted: May 6th, 2008, 9:04 am
by gypsyjoker
I try to follow Clay's policy of not taking anything personal.

Loser and a Poser
pocket full of heartache
laughing at sad jokes

wrote that for myself

fortunately I got holes in my pockets
I leave a trail of broken hearted laments
for the blue bird of happiness to follow

Posted: May 6th, 2008, 10:26 am
by sooZen
Made me laugh Bennie...if'n a critic doesn't like something, that just means I need to see it, read it or hear it.