punctuate
will these words arouse you
as the thoughts i've had
have aroused me..?
these words can only reach you
thru your beautiful green eyes
and onwards to that space between
your ears where my hope for
our fantasy can link one more time
do these words have the moisture
of my flicking tongue
as it moves slowly and gracefully
under your right breast
tracking upwards towards your areola..?
this chasm that comes between us
i can only write with the intent
boiling within me and urge
that they will bridge to you
so you feel my passion suck
your nipple until it hardens...
please... put these words,
place your hands upon them
and gently push them lower
towards that spot where you
have always enjoyed them to be...
yes. take my words and place them,
put them in any place that makes you
feel like we are one on this journey
to unite us - to bond us in the gallop
of our wants and our needs to meld
into one ... the place where the words
have come together and joins us both,
that place beyond description where we
melt embraced upon adjectives and adverbs
moaning for nouns that are filled with
our contractions and exclamations ending
with simply three periods... pausing until
our pronouns rise to proper nouns
and again our words can build stories
that confess our desires to punctuate
our O's and Ah's in adherence to fantasy.
cecil
punctuate
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Three (wonderful!) replies. You gals are so beautiful.... ((pant)).
But only THREE ??? I can't believe it. This is another brilliant and extremely original poem of the like that nobody has ever laid eyes on. Have you really taken notice of the absolute cleverness of this piece? Come on. This is Studio 8, the place to be for arts of every sort(ed)... where terrific writing is displayed for all to enjoy and immerse themselves into the pool of like-minded winners on the creative stage. Three replies...??? Speak up! I don't bite... ((shakes head in disbelief...))
But only THREE ??? I can't believe it. This is another brilliant and extremely original poem of the like that nobody has ever laid eyes on. Have you really taken notice of the absolute cleverness of this piece? Come on. This is Studio 8, the place to be for arts of every sort(ed)... where terrific writing is displayed for all to enjoy and immerse themselves into the pool of like-minded winners on the creative stage. Three replies...??? Speak up! I don't bite... ((shakes head in disbelief...))
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well, he nips...Speak up! I don't bite...
actually, this is an amazing write and you have inspired me:
no crosswords
to fill in the blanks
a puzzle piece of me
is missing you
only a whole remains
i look you up in my dictionary
it says, "he's there for you"
i fill in my blanks
with your lightning rounds
touch tone emotes
i play this game so well
but you win every time
Freedom's just another word...
http://soozen.livejournal.com/
http://soozen.livejournal.com/
thank you
Cecil - (I'm hoping that this is the right name. 
Haven't figured all that out yet)
Your poem so inspired me. The title, punctuation, just kept running through my mind until I had to write about it as well. Kudos to you for a loving sensual write.
Jen
Haven't figured all that out yet)Your poem so inspired me. The title, punctuation, just kept running through my mind until I had to write about it as well. Kudos to you for a loving sensual write.
Jen
immeasurable...illogical...infinity squared
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