The Love of My Life

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saw
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The Love of My Life

Post by saw » May 29th, 2008, 7:33 pm

I spent the evening with Stella Artois
and she was very cold to me
just the way I like her, my mouth
was on her nipple the entire evening,
she pored her heart out,
into my belly and changed
my perceptions
by making herself available to me
time and again, the big flirt
ogled me with no remorse
and beckoned my lips....
her only promise, the elixir of life,
and the Korean woman
at the liquor store around the corner,
knows, we got somethin' goin' on.
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by westcoast » May 29th, 2008, 11:50 pm

i gotta kick outta this one saw. well done!

:)


~westie

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Post by Perdida » May 30th, 2008, 7:52 am

smilin wide, love the stella...

enjoyed.

:D
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Post by constantine » May 30th, 2008, 9:48 am

so you're moving in on stella now. lay off pauli girl - she's mine, she was pauli's, but now she belongs to me!

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Post by Arcadia » May 30th, 2008, 11:10 am

I prefer Weirsteiner or brown Killkeny now, but next my door they only sell Quilmes!! :lol:

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Post by WIREMAN » May 30th, 2008, 6:08 pm

good one steve.....now i'm heading across the street to my fave bar for
a drink they named after me"the WIREMAN"....2 shots of ketel 1 vodka
a shot of coconut malibu rum and o.j. but first ya kick it off with a shot of malibu straight up....bye-bye.......

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Post by Doreen Peri » May 30th, 2008, 8:36 pm

Ohhh.... it's beer!

:D :P :roll:

I'm such a ditz.

Had to read the replies to get it.

Cute!

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Post by Lightning Rod » May 30th, 2008, 8:43 pm

very clever poem, saw
classic subtle personification
I enjoyed it like I enjoy my beer
with tomato juice
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by judih » May 30th, 2008, 11:12 pm

thanks for the annotation, doreen.
round here if it's not tuborg, it needs babelfish.

great ode to a temptress, saw

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Post by saw » May 31st, 2008, 6:23 am

thanx, one and all for your feedback on Lady Stella....oh, she's calling me...gotta go now.
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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