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The Love of My Life

Posted: May 29th, 2008, 7:33 pm
by saw
I spent the evening with Stella Artois
and she was very cold to me
just the way I like her, my mouth
was on her nipple the entire evening,
she pored her heart out,
into my belly and changed
my perceptions
by making herself available to me
time and again, the big flirt
ogled me with no remorse
and beckoned my lips....
her only promise, the elixir of life,
and the Korean woman
at the liquor store around the corner,
knows, we got somethin' goin' on.

Posted: May 29th, 2008, 11:50 pm
by westcoast
i gotta kick outta this one saw. well done!

:)


~westie

Posted: May 30th, 2008, 7:52 am
by Perdida
smilin wide, love the stella...

enjoyed.

:D

Posted: May 30th, 2008, 9:48 am
by constantine
so you're moving in on stella now. lay off pauli girl - she's mine, she was pauli's, but now she belongs to me!

Posted: May 30th, 2008, 11:10 am
by Arcadia
I prefer Weirsteiner or brown Killkeny now, but next my door they only sell Quilmes!! :lol:

Posted: May 30th, 2008, 6:08 pm
by WIREMAN
good one steve.....now i'm heading across the street to my fave bar for
a drink they named after me"the WIREMAN"....2 shots of ketel 1 vodka
a shot of coconut malibu rum and o.j. but first ya kick it off with a shot of malibu straight up....bye-bye.......

Posted: May 30th, 2008, 8:36 pm
by Doreen Peri
Ohhh.... it's beer!

:D :P :roll:

I'm such a ditz.

Had to read the replies to get it.

Cute!

Posted: May 30th, 2008, 8:43 pm
by Lightning Rod
very clever poem, saw
classic subtle personification
I enjoyed it like I enjoy my beer
with tomato juice

Posted: May 30th, 2008, 11:12 pm
by judih
thanks for the annotation, doreen.
round here if it's not tuborg, it needs babelfish.

great ode to a temptress, saw

Posted: May 31st, 2008, 6:23 am
by saw
thanx, one and all for your feedback on Lady Stella....oh, she's calling me...gotta go now.