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we chimes

Posted: June 5th, 2008, 11:15 pm
by emel.scott
we chimes
each dangling
in solitude

randomly touch
in the grace
of the breeze

then share together
what we alone
will never be

Posted: June 6th, 2008, 7:48 am
by Perdida
i hear the touching......lovely emel

:D

Posted: June 6th, 2008, 10:18 am
by gypsyjoker
pretty
nice
:D

Re: we chimes

Posted: September 8th, 2010, 1:52 pm
by joel
I've been going back through and looking at things I may have missed or filed away in other parts of my mind while I was away...and this is a really nice piece on a day when I woke up to just enough wind and rain to try to shake the chimes. Good read!

Re: we chimes

Posted: September 12th, 2010, 12:55 pm
by hester_prynne
...ding...ding...indeed we hear the wind of each other.
Nice.
H 8)

Re: we chimes

Posted: September 19th, 2010, 1:51 am
by emel.scott
Thanks for pulling this out of mothballs as it holds a timeless quality for me (it's the signature on my Gmails)

The last verse has evolved a bit since first penned. I wonder how anyone feels about the revision:

we chimes
each dangling
in solitude

randomly touch
in the grace
of the breeze

to share a chord
one voice alone
can never breathe