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wordless

Posted: June 21st, 2008, 10:50 pm
by mtmynd
you say the words
are on the tip
of your tongue

i'll suck them off
for the passion
speaks louder than
the words ever will

one moan at a time
building into a
crescendo of ecstasy
that would leave
anais nin speechless

her pen spent of ink
with a drypoint
sketching vapors
of heat left behind

((wordless))

Posted: June 22nd, 2008, 9:08 am
by westcoast
a
crescendo of ecstasy
that would leave
anais nin speechless
great lines -- deep passions

enjoyed!

~westie

Posted: June 23rd, 2008, 4:36 pm
by mtmynd
Thanks, westie, for the reply. Thought I'd better answer you before this brilliant poem ended up on the next page, never to be seen again. Whoa! That would be a cruel trick on originality and creativity!

signed,

Mr Humble

Posted: June 23rd, 2008, 9:41 pm
by westcoast
lol!

Posted: June 25th, 2008, 10:46 am
by mtmynd
westie-j ... it's not so much your 'lol' but that calm glow on your face in the aftermath of those lol's that get to me...

TY :)