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Superpower with a target on my back
Posted: June 25th, 2008, 4:10 pm
by mnaz
I don't blame you; I would hate me too.
I get up each day, worship my every breath,
scramble the fighters and time grows late.
Over there, it's always over there.
The blackberries came early this year.
No one has any sense of time any more.
Sometimes the weeds grow too high,
but now I have technology.
Posted: June 25th, 2008, 7:22 pm
by Doreen Peri
Astute observations
nazzimo
Posted: June 25th, 2008, 8:37 pm
by mnaz
doreen.... "nazzimo"... I like...
can't seem to write more than pieces of a pome...
need a little more self control, work the idea a bit..
I just dash off these half-realized little buzz pomes...
..................
thanks
Posted: June 26th, 2008, 6:12 am
by Dave The Dov
I think doreen just found you a new screen name.
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the us recession
Posted: June 26th, 2008, 3:19 pm
by hester_prynne
Fucking hell Mnaz....
This is so powerful, I'm stunned.
It says so much.....and I hear it, deliciously.
H

Posted: June 26th, 2008, 11:52 pm
by emel.scott
I'd love to see what you see not what I see nazzimo so please, work on it a little more.
Posted: June 27th, 2008, 6:01 am
by saw
I like this mnaz, it's a clever vehicle to illustrate American nationalism,
made me flip back to the old Guess Who song, American Woman.....
yes mnaz, we go about our business here.... unaware in our little
privileged worlds....while the bloody hands of our government
have their way with the rest of the world.......
nicely conceived and delivered..........
Posted: June 27th, 2008, 6:06 am
by gypsyjoker
I so admire your restraint mnaz.
You say so much
in so few words.
so eloquently
thank you
The deepest feeling always shows itself in silence; not in silence, but restraint.
M. Moore