Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

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Who says just because you see it in black and white doesn't make it true?

True dat, mt!

Color me satisfied!

It all makes sense now!

<center>drove me crazy</center>
trying to figure out
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a very well-balanced composition that speaks volumes on the duality of life - the eternal struggle between the yin and the yang which is the supreme balancing act that requires the subtle forces of imagination to bring forth into an overtly simple dialogue, yes?

Sure. Why not?

i knew you'd understand, Dor'. thanks!

You're very welcome.



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hey cecil.. just messin' with ya... If you read all that into it and that's what you intended, that's great! A poem can mean anything you want it to.

Your description is sure 'nuff a true analysis of how it works.

I call it (them) "Creative Writings"... wouldn't you?

Well, since you created them, yeah, OK.

now ya got me stuttering ccccecccill......

hah! wired, my man... slow down when you read this... pace yourself, pause between the dots... and again before the next line, inhale... sense the rhythm, clip, clip, clip... it's there, you can hear it, your can feel it... it's all so, so... right now. boogo-shhoooba-deliccccato.

yeah crazy cloud....suave..........

ahh... crazy cloud... great expression... and a great book, indeed.

take care, wired, and thanks for stopping in.

I like the subtle gradations of this poem

emel.scott wrote:I like the subtle gradations of this poem

now you've got me rollin'
you are one of the best critics I've ever read