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Endless Reverie
Posted: July 16th, 2008, 9:44 pm
by goldenmyst
The sycophants gather like vultures whose rapacious feast convenes in climactic bursts of beastly devouring, furnace belly bellows burning with desire in the midnight orgy enveloped by darkness like dying widows falling into melancholic seizures of memory no roads leading outward from the sanctum of sanity trapped till the end in endless reverie.
Posted: July 16th, 2008, 10:17 pm
by Doreen Peri
whew! long sentence!
I've had a poem called "sycophant" in the works for months.
I like that word "rapacious"...now i have to look it up.
Midnight orgy you say? what fun!
nice alliteration
Posted: July 16th, 2008, 11:26 pm
by mtmynd
you're on a roll, John. are these (2) new pieces or some things you've been working on for awhile and they finally came together? me gusta!
Posted: July 16th, 2008, 11:33 pm
by goldenmyst
Doreen, I look forward to reading your "Sycophant" poem. Thanks dear for reading my ranting and raving. lol
mtmynd, these are two completely new pieces. I wrote them in the last few days. I enjoy walks in the fringe.
John
Posted: July 17th, 2008, 12:04 pm
by hester_prynne
"sanity trapped till the end in endless reverie."
this is one of those lines that makes me lean forward in awe.
Bravo man.
H
