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the mingo
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Shadows

Post by the mingo » July 22nd, 2008, 7:53 am

For working title purposes
anything that casts a shadow
is real

There are visible &
invisible shadows

Invisible shadows are the
only ones that can be cast
through time

Everyone is a tribe
of invisible shadows

It is good to remember this
every time you greet anyone
every time you say,
"Hi, nice to meet you"
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Post by saw » July 22nd, 2008, 9:33 am

I like the thinkin' here.....and I will certainly keep that in mind....peace
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Post by constantine » July 22nd, 2008, 2:25 pm

the invisible shadows carry the most weight. neat poem.
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Post by the mingo » July 23rd, 2008, 9:55 am

thx,Gentleman, and Good Mornin' to ya!
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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