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Carving
Posted: July 30th, 2008, 9:05 am
by the mingo
carving words
into the ground
into the bark
into the rain
into the milk
Posted: July 30th, 2008, 10:37 am
by SmileGRL
like cereal drifting in a pool of milk
like a stick trailing over sand
like raindrops on a window pane
like leaves falling in my hand
Posted: July 30th, 2008, 10:37 am
by Odette
Indelible brevities. Très bon.
Posted: July 30th, 2008, 12:52 pm
by the mingo
SmileGRL - my hand holds as many chestnuts the time called years I've spent in this land - thx for reading & responding (kiss)
Odette - Your English is better than mine, I had to look the word "indelible" up. I thought I knew what it meant and I did, kind of, but there are many more shades to it than what I knew. thx for reading & responding. (kiss for you too)