you. i breathe

[SmileGRL]

i bReathe the uNcut flowers grOwing in your soul. grow groW she whiSpers drEams. coMe fill my ear. i drink you tHirsty with grins gRowing roots in laUghing wrinkles kiSsed my eyes. your whiMsical heaRt is fertile ground is bEautifully siLLy jokes is sWeet warm tea nourishing my fAiry berry dreams liFting me up up uP. i aM the sUn. sunrays nO greys. just yelloW blooms filling my nose kiSsing both iLashes with petalled fiNger aFternoons. tea? 4for 2two. pOpcorn & winged cocoons. yOu pull me iN you sPin me deep stuCk in favorite cookie trees. leaves rustle my kNees. you plaNt me like an uN cut fLower. yoU. i breathe

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[constantine]

great day on big rock candy mountain- excellent work!

[SmileGRL]

candy mountain...haha. so clever you are. so...not blind. thanks dino. great day? yes! have one...

[bennie2]

i read this in work today, mj. inside my head i read it aloud and it has a real internal rhythm. if I had a better voice i'd record it and send it to you. i use your capitalisations as musical rests and stresses.

uncut flowers with a chance to take root
to grow
to flourish in dirt

cut flowers prepared for sale
to drink from clear waters
then die in days

[goldenmyst]

MJ, you spin cotton candy dreams into tapestries of woven beauty.

John

[Perdida]

you plaNt me like an uN cut fLower. yoU. i breathe

Damn that's beautiful.

[SmileGRL]

bennie...that's perfect! and yes...

john...you always make me smile. thanks

perdida...* she curtsies* thank you kindly

[sweetwater]

deconstructing mathematics
until the emotions become real

[SmileGRL]

sweetwater...emotions are always real. it's the mathematics that sometimes get in the way...

[hester_prynne]

just a delightful read, thru and thru, again and again....
H

[SmileGRL]

thank you miss hester. glad i delight, more than once

[mtmynd]

yes, Hes'... 'delight' is the perfect adjective for this piece.

very real, mj... and original as you are. keep doin' it.

[Lightning Rod]

Yes, this is a piece with great whimsey, SG.

What dino was quoting was a Woodie Guthrie tune

Here is my whimsical version of it:

Big Rock Candy Mountain

[emel.scott]

Thanks Clay, listening was like a lullaby for me this evening. I'll sleep better because of it.

Scott

[Lightning Rod]

Thanks Clay, listening was like a lullaby for me this evening. I'll sleep better because of it.

Scott

thank you scott

that's one of the highest compliments I could imagine

I love to put people to sleep...haha

I used to sing this tune to my daughter as a lullaby

hats off to Woody