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shallowness
Posted: August 11th, 2008, 12:26 pm
by Doreen Peri
shallowness never scared me
even though i am well aware
i could drown in a teaspoonful
Posted: August 12th, 2008, 12:09 pm
by sweetwater
a shallowness
that is difficult
to respond to
as if to suggest
only the shallow
would respond?
no - that's just
the expressed insecurity
of the stranger inside myself
Posted: August 12th, 2008, 3:14 pm
by hester_prynne
This..is sublime Dor....love it, brevity and all....
H
Posted: August 12th, 2008, 3:21 pm
by Lightning Rod
this is too deep a subject for me
all my teaspoons are burnt on the bottom
Posted: August 12th, 2008, 3:22 pm
by emel.scott
Well it should scare you. I always stay at the deep end of the pool, then if I drown, at least people won't laugh at me (any more then they do already at least)
Posted: August 12th, 2008, 3:56 pm
by stilltrucking
shallowness never scared me
even though i am well aware
i could drown in a teaspoonful
that is deep
ditto what hester said.
Posted: August 12th, 2008, 10:18 pm
by Doreen Peri
sweetwater - i love your reply, thank you!
hest .... you're a dear. thanks much.
Lrod - ..... I have nothing to say about burnt spoons. Yuck.
emel - I don't know where this came from. I found it in my notes. I mean I don't remember the inspiration for it. Someone probably called me shallow. Oh well. I guess that's their shallowness showing. I know how easily I can drown.
truckin .... thanks very much, friend