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one lazy afternoon

Posted: August 12th, 2008, 6:02 pm
by wannabeguru
So fine
to see you if only for that time
brief, unsatisfying.....not long enough!

I write it here
though where you'll check who
KNOWS?

Even with 3places to check with
YOU
it
isn't enough, ya know?

Missing isn't so bad
when the sun breaks through
SUDDENLY...and it's you.

Posted: August 12th, 2008, 10:13 pm
by Doreen Peri
Sounds like love to me. Or a deep attraction.

Enjoyed.

Nice to see you here again.

Posted: August 16th, 2008, 7:09 pm
by Perdida
Missing isn't so bad
when the sun breaks through
SUDDENLY
really loved that. :D